This WIP is at the stage where I just need one more read through then it's off to the publisher and hope they accept it.
Mind you this is just part of the scene in the BDSM dungeon. So here it is.......
".....Then he held up his new toy.
Switching it on he held it against my clit. It felt nice as it seemed to gently caress and suck at my clitoris, almost like when he drew it into his mouth—marvellous.
Okay I can handle this easily.
Then he turned it up a couple of notches.
I felt my eyes widen as I looked at him. He had this maniacal look on his face, a look of sheer evil delight and I knew I was in trouble.
I felt my orgasm begin. It erupted across my pussy then continued!
It was as if I had three, four, five orgasms in a continuous row. I screamed loudly, my head flailing back and forth as I yelled. I have never in my life experienced what I just did but John wasn’t satisfied. It went up one more notch.
My already sensitive clit reacted in a way I’d never thought possible. To say I had another orgasm would be grossly understating it. My whole body shook. I wanted to pull away from the toy but at the same time I wanted to press myself against it. My climax seemed never-ending as it took me to places I could never dream of.
I shrieked, I howled. Hell, I was wailing as I felt my eyes roll back in my head and, for the second time in the dungeon, I passed out.
When I came to, John kissed the tip of my nose. I was back in the warmth of the bed, John’s arms holding me safe.
“I think we can safely say that worked. So were the orgasms mind-blowing?” he asked tenderly....."
© Suzy Shearer 2017